TLC by Chrouya
Script:	PhotoKano 02 [timed-iMdai]
Workraw: PhotoKano 02 (720p)

2
She came in the back door even though iher seat's up front.{bit liberal, but can't make the proper way sound good}{She's taking the long way around getting to her seat through the back door.}
She came in the back door even though her seat's up front.
{typo}

12
Would you lend me your English text book?
Could you lend me your English textbook?
{I'm not a QC, but w/e :D}

143
Knowledge for students section 1, life on school premises, paragraph twelve:{timer: seito kokoroe kounai seikatsu dai-juuni-kou}
Knowledge for students section one, life on school premises, paragraph twelve:{timer: seito kokoroe kounai seikatsu dai-juuni-kou}
{consistency}

159
I'll never go anywhere without it!{tlc, not sure about the ～かいでか -alta}[looks fine to me}
I'll never go anywhere without it!{tlc, not sure about the ～かいでか -alta}{looks fine to me}
{comment bracket was broken}
{long story short: 歩かいでか　＝　歩くに決まってるでしょう！, but keeping it as is since translating it liberally would sound too much like the line 2 lines before}
Read about some Osaka-ben grammatical degeneration (or just variants) over here:
http://www.ytv.co.jp/announce/kotoba/back/0501-0600/0541.html (ctrl+f for でか )


182
I could ask her to only let you in.
Shall I ask her if we can at least let you in?
{This is a question, and I feel like the sentence should be a bit stretched to match the timing}
183
Huh, really?
Huh, would you?
{if 182 gets applied, I guess 183 sounds awkward} {for real?}

191
Maikano is the most popular girl among the first-years.
{I wonder if you want to make this line plural for more confusion}

192
To make them only let you in, that takes some skill.
To make them only let you in despite the ban, that takes some skill.
{I'd add the dekin=ban in this line}

197
That's vulgar!{not sure on this one}
How nasty!
{I think this is the best liberal translation for this line.}
{This line is in reaction to his excessive coughing I guess. the "How" should stay there at least}

201
Kano is my little sister!
Kanon is my little sister!
{pretty sure he pronounced her name full}

217
It's not the camera's fault.
It's not because of the camera.
{alternative}
{While せい implies a cause in a negative sense (compared to おかげ), this one feels really natural}

219
But the world did change.
But it did change my world completely.
{I think this should have more impact. also the world --> my world, as it's abstract}

250
I forgot my hairband, so I came to pick it up.
I forgot my hairbands, so I went to pick them up.
{you have to use to go in this context, because she already has them in her hair now}
{at least, at first glance, the line felt like she was still going to pick them up}

{260}
I mean, they wear swimsuits in gravure photos too.{I'll start to carry my camera around and I'm totally expecting this to happen to me}{you and me both bro!  I WISH!}
{I'd need some girl friends first though ;w;}

308
Three: A prefect photo of them takes 0.3 seconds...
Three: A perfect photo of them takes 0.3 seconds...
{typo}

410
Doesn't joining a club immediately take some huge effort?
What great achievements for someone right after joining our club!
{this sentence is about Maeda-kun doing lots of "great" stuff so fast after joining the Photography club}

411
Sometimes arguing about pure underclassmen,
Incidentally persuading an innocent underclassman,
{I'd go for the expressional definition of tokini; it only happened once}
{this line refers to that Maikano scene}

412
sometimes acquiring school swimsuit shots of your childhood friend,
incidentally acquiring school swimsuit shots of your childhood friend,
{see 411}

413
sometimes abusing the strict student council president's weakness.
incidentally abusing the strict student council president's weakness.

419
You won't know even if you pay for it, Nii-yan!
I won't care if you're going to pay for it, Nii-yan!
{the object of "shiranai yo" is actually the speaker herself}